Request for a beta

[quirky_orthodox]

I am very sorry if this is in the wrong place but I've spent 5 minutes 
trying to figure out where to post this.

Quite simply, I need a beta for a fanfiction I am writing. I am 21 and 
I've been writing fanfiction for years, but now I want to do something 
serious and my commas are letting me down quite badly.

The story is an A/U in which James Potter lives. I know it may sound 
cliched and awful but please give me a chance on this. I asked for a 
beta at FA and she not only added extra paragraphs without permission 
but also misspelt 'Moony'. I am really wrapped up in this and want to 
make it a success.

Please email me at: elf_friend_moonlight at ... if you are 
interested.