What to take out - GoF

[Dave Hardenbrook]

Sunday, July 21, 2002, 8:37:02 PM, "feliciarickmann" wrote:

HMyc> NO!!  I think the pensieve is a masterstoke, almost as ood as the end
HMyc> of PoA but NOT QUITE.  I think it's a wonderful plot device for 
HMyc> flashback.  Sorry the pensieve stays in some form or other....

I think the Pensieve could easily be condensed into *one* scene, with
Karkaroff, Bagman, Crouch Jr., and Mrs. Lestrange all there together,
with Barty Sr. interrogating them one after another.

HMyc> Much extraneous matter about Hagrid & Madam Maxim could be condensed 
HMyc> maybe?

That whole subplot could probably go.

HMyc> pleased to see CoS as a PC game is due 8th November * g *

That *is* good news... :)

-- 
Dave