Fictional plot holes (was: The Romance)

[eggplant107]

 "Carol" <justcarol67 at ...> wrote:

> I'm tempted to buy a spare set of paperbacks [
]
> annotate them, and mail them to JKR or her publisher
> as a gift, pointing out [
]  the Potters already
> being under the Fidelius Charm just after Harry's
> first birthday in DH when it doesn't occur until
> a week before Halloween in PoA.

I could be wrong but I don't think DH mentions the Fidelius Charm in that scene, nor does it specify just how long "just after" is.

> inconsistencies like Ron's somehow knowing about
> Draco's hand of Glory 

Be sure to put that one at the end of your list inconsistencies
(that and the one about Voldemort and his dissatisfaction with the Elder Wand), otherwise the publisher will stop reading and just assume you're someone so desperate to find plot holes you find them even when they don't exist. 

> everything from typos like "miniscule" for "minuscule"
> [
] Honestly, *someone* should point out all the
> places where her inconsistencies distract the reader.
 
I don't think that distracted many readers, in fact I wouldn't be terribly surprised if you weren't the only human being on this planet who noticed that typo. 

 Eggplant