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[enjoiturbulence]

Hey all.  I've yet to actually post here, simply cause I'm an idiot 
and can't come up with any of the theories you cats can.  I don't 
even know if this is something proper to post, but I could use some 
help.  I'm one of those dorks (see a pattern of self-deprication?) 
who is into writing HP fanfiction.  I have a handful up at 
http://www.thedarkarts.org/authorLinks/Chris_D/ if anyone is 
interested.  

I am in the middle of a long piece of fiction called "By The Sword", 
and though I am getting little reaction, I am putting a lot into 
this, much more then necissary.  One of the things I want to do in 
life is write, and I see this as the perfect exercise it perfecting 
my craft.  I have chapter 10 written, but I need some help making 
sure it is in good condition to post.  I've not heard from my beta 
reader (editor) in a while, and I want to get this up as soon as I 
can.  If anyone could help me out, with grammer, organization, 
spelling, and just keeping to grounded, I would be forever indebted 
to them (ever read Choke by Chuck Palahniuk?  Kind of like that, but 
involving no monetary donations of any kind).  If you can spare some 
time to help me out, drop me a line.  Thanks ahead of time, and much 
peace and respect to all.  one love.  chris