WANTED: Grammar Expert
joy_the_lemur
joy_the_lemur at yahoo.com
Wed May 14 18:50:32 UTC 2003
[snipsnip]
> Mycropht, who is paid to edit things says :
>
> 1. I personally think that African-American should be hyphenated.
> 2. This is the most awkward sentence. There is a vague antecedant
for the
> pronoun "her". Is the antecedant "Toni Morrison" or "genius"?
Does Toni
> have a pet genius that lives with her, also female. As highly
unlikely as
> that is, when there are two nouns before a pronoun it can be
classed as an
> error.
>
> Mycropht is anal about grammar.
>
I believe it was indeed the pronoun "her" and that it would've been
correct if it had
been replaced by "Morrison" or anything else more specific than the
pronoun. I
suppose it's in a grey area now because that use/construction is more
commonplace
and has become generally accepted. Or everyone's slacking off in
grammar. ;-)
-Joy, posting at the risk of having this message show up 5 days later.
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