Adverbs can be your friends WAS: Re: The Return of Tom Swift
olivierfouquet2000
olivierfouquet2000 at yahoo.fr
Mon Oct 13 21:47:58 UTC 2003
Even though I agree Tom Swifites are not a sign of great talent with the pen, I think I
have an idea why JKR use them so much. English is my second language and I assure you
that so many adverbs make an exceptionally easy read for foreigner or-I assume-
children. I have the impression that adverbs such as "cooly", "harshly" or the likes are
much easier to understand than specific verbs conveying the same feeling. For instance, I
would have need a second to understand "Harry slumped down in his chair and glowered
at Ron" Barb exemple of a sentence that can be re-written without adverb while "Harry
sat grumpily in his chair" is immediately clear to me.
However I do feel there are a bit too many snarling and beaming in Oop.
Olivier
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