Harry/Snape fic Re: [HPFGU-OTChatter] A Word on Reviews

[Dina Lerret]

On 6/9/05, I wrote:

> As to why I don't review very often, see above about encountering more
> badfic than good.

Then there's cases of fics that appeal to my pervyness of gender
bending and the writing isn't bad... but the characterization...
wooboy, out of character (OOC) is a *huge* understatement.

I was reading "Little Miss Mary" where Harry starts crossdressing as a
girl (AKA Mary) and has sex with Severus (AKA Uncle John) and Harry
decides he wants to become a hermaphrodite and get pregnant and this
is just a snippet of the dialogue:
"More, Sev, give him to me. He's jealous of all the attention my girl
entrance has been getting. He wants to be as tender as she is." His
back rippled when I hit my target again. "Take me hard, Sev, I'm not
fragile back there the way I am between my legs."

Err, the writer did give warnings about the fic.

Dina