New Chapter Lost Souls Found
Lisa
seuferer at netins.net
Wed Jun 22 22:30:40 UTC 2005
Lost Souls Found, Chapter 43: Nuptials
At last we see the wedding of Remus and Tonksfrom the perspective
of Severus and Rowena. I agonized over Severus' "best man" speech
for ages, but I am actually pleased with the result. I wanted him
to be `funny', or at least make a snarky comment about how he
doesn't "do" humor, but the Snape in my head was appalled with the
result every time. The few paragraphs of the `speech' alone
represent days of agonizing, deleting and re-writing. What exists
here met the approval of my internal Severus. I hope it meets yours.
Reprise the summary:
Severus Snape and OFC, Romance/drama, hurt/comfort. After OotP so
loads of spoilers for that book, but before Half Blood Prince; so AU
to that book when it arrives. Voldemort is out in the open, Snape
is involved in DE activities because of his OotP Spy role. A
researcher from Ministry offers to aid and assist Dumbledore and is
reacquainted with our Potion's Master whom she knew slightly from
school. Snarky Snape, in depth plot. (Way too much plot for those of
you who want PWP.) WIP Rated NC-17 for romantic/sexual content in
later chapters as well as some graphic/mature dealings with the
horrors of a Magical War. Overall a romance, but I do not pull any
punches when it comes to dealing with Snape as a Death Eater to
maintain his `cover'. War is gruesome.
http://www.fanfiction.net/~lisasimaginings Author page (see my cute
familyand my hubby who has not cut his hair since HBP-release date
was announced, just for me so he can dress as Snape for the book
party!! What a guy! /vbg/)
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For this chapter I had a great deal of help from the folks at the
HP_Britglish on British wedding traditions. You can see the topic
and their wonderful answers here:
http://www.livejournal.com/community/hp_britglish/117719.html
They were extremely friendly, helpful and very quick with their
responses. I recommend `lurking' that group just for fun if you are
a HP fanfic writerI learn all sorts of interesting things there.
A special thank you to Lady Claire who is helping me with some
German translations I want to use between Severus and Katrina, to
Surgical Steel who has helped me a great deal with authentic Texan
material, and to Hermaania Malfoy and WitchEcho who have begun the
process of going back through the entire fic and Brit-Picking for
me! Yay! I am not, at this time, going back and DOING the repairs,
as I focus on getting the fic done before HBP comes out, and
fortunately they all seem to be relatively minor without detracting
from the overall story.
If you are interested, I am keeping a `running list' of known-fix-
needs here:
http://www.livejournal.com/users/weasleyfan/10155.html?nc=17
I am always grateful for comments, critiques, constructive
criticism, etc.
Hope you enjoy the chapter!
Shanti
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