Update of Lost Souls Found at Occlumency

[Lisa]

Lost Souls Found  
http://occlumency.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=3381

I have recently added a LiveJournal entry with various pictures and 
avatars, which coincide with my personal mental images of the 
characters in the story.  If you are a person who likes to have a 
firmer image of the characters in your mind as you read, I encourage 
you to have a look.  Anyone may view my Journal, though only 
registered users may post in it to prevent unwanted `trolls'.  Some 
of the images are fanart links where I credit the artist thoroughly 
and completely, while the OC images are `model' head-shots from 
various random internet sites.

http://www.livejournal.com/users/weasleyfan/17180.html

Severus Snape/OFC, Romance/drama, hurt/comfort. Voldemort is out in 
the open. Severus Snape is actively involved in Death Eater 
activities because of his role as spy for the Order of the Phoenix. 
A researcher from the Ministry for Magic offers to aid and assist 
Dumbledore and is reacquainted with our Potions master, whom she 
knew slightly from school. Rated L (NC-17) for romantic/sexual 
content in later chapters as well as some graphic/mature dealings 
with the horrors of a Magical War. Overall a romance, but war is 
gruesome.  Way too much plot for those who like PWP.

Chapter 19 posted, Chapter 20 is in the queue.

It is complete, but is not posted in its entirety at Occlumency yet, 
as it is going through its final beta-revisions, edits and 
verifications.  This has been a nearly two-year long WIP.  If you 
have read and enjoyed the story at other archives, I encourage you 
to consider re-reading it here.  It has been thoroughly Brit-picked, 
grammar-mechanics polished, and I have repaired minor consistency 
errors, as well as more effectively explained and filled `plot 
holes'.  

Because of the length of the story, it might be a more 
manageable `read' to handle in smaller doses, and my 
edit/polish/verification rate for my chapters seems to be about two 
to three chapters a week.  You do not need to fear that this story 
will be `abandoned' before being posted to its completion.

I adore reviews of all sorts, including criticisms so don't be shy!

I hope you enjoy,

Shanti
http://www.hauntedchambers.net/
Haunted Chambers, a Harry Potter Role Playing Game run by adults