A-shirt,/beater for Carol

[Carol]

"potioncat" wrote:
>
> I've been to "back to school sales" and came across a big bag of A-
> shirts on sale. So, I got to wondering, did you ever hear from the 
> romance writer about her male lead and his black beater?
> 
> Potioncat
>
Carol responds:

She loved my editing of the ms. and accepted most of the edits and
suggestions, but she said that some of my comments, including the one
about "wifebeaters," made her laugh. I assume that she kept
"wifebeater" in. After all, her genre is borderline "chick-lit" and
her intended audience is not old fuddy-duddies like me!

I also wrote a query letter and synopsis for her, which she's very
happy with. She's not confidently submitting them to agents. If she
finds a publisher and passes on the good news to me, I'll let you know.

Carol, whose current client needs to be informed that Hawaii is not "a
few hundred miles off the east coast of the United States"!!!