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> Carol, wondering *who* determined that those charges were accurate and appropriate and whether that person was right
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Potioncat:
Oh, I see your point, but the way the full report was written, it made sense. There's a section that identifies the patient, the provider (doctor, hospital whatever) dates and the name of the nurse auditor. The nurse and her/his supervisor signed the report.

Now that I think about it, I don't know why we just didn't write, "I audited the records--yada yada--I determined...."

None of our competitors did either. They were the ones who would write, "This nurse reviewed the records....In this nurse's opinion..."