Editing question

[justcarol67]

Brian wrote:
>
> replying to
> "preventing and managing falls is the responsibility of all staff members"
> 
> Works for me
> But if the suthor uses terms like systems issue, perhaps he/she doesn't want it to be understood easily   lol
> 
> Brian
>
Carol responds:
Hi, Brian. The author is a nurse educator (meaning that she teaches nursing at a university). She does want her writing to be understood, which is why she has me edit it. (Three of the four articles I've edited for her so far have been published; I'm not sure about the fourth.)

Carol, wishing that clear writing weren't such a rare commodity