Editing question

potioncat willsonkmom at msn.com
Wed Mar 31 22:39:24 UTC 2010



> Carol again:
 Would "A fall, like a medication error, is the responsibility of the whole staff, not just the clinician in charge of the patient" work? 
> 
> Carol, who wishes that people would just say what they mean
>
Potioncat:
I like your sentence.
If the article is for nurses, then I'd change clinician to nurse. 






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