Fanfic Closets

[Rita Winston]

No: HPFGUIDX 952

--- In HPforGrownups at egroups.com, "Denise" <gypsycaine at y...> wrote:
> And here's the closet.  Warning, this is extremely graphic hence 
> the rating R.  But it is odd.
http://blue.fanfiction.net/master.cfm?action=story-read&storyid=58745

I read it, and am blushing, and laughing, and ... never mind how else 
I'm reacting, other than wondering how could anyone have found this 
confusing? It's quite clear, not to mention explicit, what is going 
on in it!

And I found the 'poodle' story flawed by a reference to Draco's 
feet as 'rather large'. I am sure he has quite small feet -- 
like one of my boyfriends in high school who wore the same size 
shoes as I did (for me, a female, they are alas not 'quite small'! 
size 7 1/2 W in those days, 8WW now!).