New Contest: Write your own last sentence.
Haggridd
jkusalavagemd at yahoo.com
Fri May 11 19:36:16 UTC 2001
No: HPFGUIDX 18563
--- In HPforGrownups at y..., "Horst or Rebecca J. Bohner" <bohners at p...>
wrote:
> "Wondering, Harry put a hand to his forehead. There was no longer
any trace
> of a scar."
>
> ----
>
> My rationale? Harry's scar is the mark of Voldemort's curse, the
first and
> last thing that links them together. We've already seen how the
scar reacts
> to the Dark Lord's presence, causing Harry pain and giving him
troublesome
> dreams and visions of You-Know-Who. But if Voldemort were finally
and
> utterly defeated and destroyed, the ultimate proof would be that
Harry no
> longer had a scar.
>
> Losing his scar would also make Harry blessedly and gloriously
ordinary. No
> longer would he be identified on sight just by one quick glance at
his
> forehead. And I suspect that by the time it's all over, Harry might
be glad
> for the opportunity to retreat to some quiet corner and enjoy a
taste of
> anonymity, much as Frodo does at the end of LOTR.
>
> I know some might find it hard to believe that Harry could ever be a
private
> individual after defeating Voldemort -- certainly most post-Hogwarts
fanfic
> seems to assume he'll be some kind of internationally known
celebrity. But
> I suspect that won't be the case. We always seem to assume that the
final
> showdown will be some big public event, and that Harry's role as
Voldemort's
> destroyer will be obvious to everyone: it might well be quite the
opposite.
> After all, every one of Harry's confrontations with V. so far has
been
> fairly private. GoF, with the Death Eaters in attendance, was the
most
> public showdown yet -- and even that wasn't exactly common knowledge
in the
> wizarding community. Fudge flat-out refused to believe there was a
word of
> truth in it, which I think may well be foreshadowing for how others
will
> react to the news of Voldemort's rebirth -- let alone his final
defeat. So,
> Harry might very indeed be able to gain anonymity by losing his
scar.
>
> I'll stop blathering now.
> --
> Rebecca J. Bohner
> rebeccaj at p...
> http://home.golden.net/~rebeccaj
Rebecca, that is the most original last sentence I have read. It is a
little early to proclaim a winner, but so far your sentence--and
accompanying rationale-- has my vote.
Haggridd
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