Contest: Scar is permanent
mcandrew at bigpond.com
mcandrew at bigpond.com
Sat May 12 01:37:30 UTC 2001
No: HPFGUIDX 18583
--- In HPforGrownups at y..., "Haggridd" <jkusalavagemd at y...> wrote:
> --- In HPforGrownups at y..., "Horst or Rebecca J. Bohner"
<bohners at p...>
> wrote:
> > "Wondering, Harry put a hand to his forehead. There was no
longer
> any trace
> > of a scar."
> >
> > Rebecca J. Bohner
> > rebeccaj at p...
> > http://home.golden.net/~rebeccaj
>
> Rebecca, that is the most original last sentence I have read. It
is a
> little early to proclaim a winner, but so far your sentence--and
> accompanying rationale-- has my vote.
>
> Haggridd
I agree - sentence and rationale are great - but remember this
passage in Book 1 (UK ed. p.16) -
"Inside, just visible, was a baby boy, fast asleep. Under a tuft of
jet-black hair over his forehead they could see a curiously shaped
cut, like a bolt of lightning.
"Is that where - ? whispered Professor McGonagall.
"Yes," said Dumbledore. "He'll have that scar forever."...
Sorry to be a wet blanket!
Lama
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