Newer UK Edition of CoS Has Three Changes From Original Edition
doffy99
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Fri Sep 6 10:54:17 UTC 2002
No: HPFGUIDX 43697
erisedstraeh2002 wrote:
> (3) In Chapter 18 of the original edition, when Lucius Malfoy and
> Dobby appear in Professor McGonagall's office, it reads: "The elf
> was carrying a stained rag with which he was attempting to finish
> cleaning Mr. Malfoy's shoes. Apparently Mr. Malfoy had set out in
a
> great hurry, for not only were his shoes half-polished, but his
> usually sleek hair was disheveled. Ignoring the elf bobbing
> apologetically around his ankles, he fixed his cold eyes upon
> Dumbledore.
>
> 'So!' he said 'You've come back. The governors suspended you, but
> you still saw fit to return to Hogwarts.'"
>
> The newer edition completely eliminates the paragraph about Dobby
> polishing Mr. Malfoy's shoes and when Mr. Malfoy speaks, it
> reads: "'So!' said Lucius Malfoy, his cold eyes fixed on
> Dumbledore. 'You've come back. The governors suspended you, but
you
> still saw fit to return to Hogwarts.'"
>
> This change has me baffled - why would Dobby be with Lucius if
Dobby
> wasn't in the middle of performing a menial task such as shoe-
> polishing? Why leave this out?
>
> In addition, the newer edition also has Dumbledore telling Harry
that
> Voldemort is the last remaining *descendant* of Slytherin (Ch. 18),
> but since we all know that JKR has already owned up to that error,
> I'm just mentioning it as an aside.
>
> I'll keep you posted as I make my way through PoA!
>
> ~Phyllis
ME, MYself And I
There is one other explanation why this might have been edited.
Perhaps it's because there's a flaw in the idea. DOBBY has a RAG! Do
you see it? IF a Sock can set a house elf free and normally a house
elf would wear a tea towel or an old pillowcase. Wouldn't/couldn't
giving Dobby a rag to polish shoes with, couldn't that be seen as
giving him a piece of clothing? Wouldn't just about ANY piece of
fabric serve this purpose? It says "CLOTHES," does that mean it has
to be HUMAN clothes? A house elf wears a tea towel or a pillowcase as
clothing, wouldn't a rag or cloth fit the bill? I'm just guessing.
personally, I like the paragraph in there. I think it makes the story
flow better. Like others have said, it explains why Dobby is there.
It's something that really should be explained.
-Jeff
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