TBAY - Prank and the (Second) Pensieve Four
Kirstini
kirst_inn at yahoo.co.uk
Tue Aug 19 12:12:59 UTC 2003
No: HPFGUIDX 77955
Down on the beach, Marina was smiling, having just explained the
Prank rather concisely. "Sometimes the simplest explanations really
are best."
She loosened her grip on Kirstini's throat for a moment. Kirstini
emitted a few sputtery noises.
"I think she wants to say something," Derranimer observed.
Marina dropped Kirstini onto the beach. Kirstini picked herself up,
and began whispering hoarsely.
"For goodness sake! Didn't you read any of my pre-exposition
disclaimers? I *love* Sirius. I do! The thing is - "
Befofre she could carry on, an owl had swooped out of nowhere with a
piece of parchment attached to its leg. It landed on Kirstini's
shoulder, money bag held out expectantly.
"It's from Arcum," said Kirstini. "It says that your explanation is
too straightforward for JKR. And I'm inclined to agree with him or
her. Although he/she does says something else which, while offering a
more complex explanation, can't be right. Ahem -
"How about this? James wants to impress Lily, and knows how
protective she can be of Snape. Sirius wants to get back at Snape for
something. So they get together and form a plan. James then "finds
out" about the prank in front of Lily when he sees Snape on the map
headed towards the Whomping Willow, timing it so he can pull Snape
out and act like a hero before Snape was far enough in to get more
then a major fright. James is then a "hero", impressing Lily, and
Snape is scared out of his wits, per Sirius's intention. In this
case, there isn't even the random factor of getting there "just in
time". Everything is premeditated from the beginning, and murder
isn't intended by Sirius at all..." "
Kirstini concluded, and looked at the assembled company, her face
slightly screwed up. "The thing is, there isn't any life debt there,
is there? I remember this coming up in an old SUNLIGHT ULTRA
discussion - if Remus hadn't really intended to kill Peter in the
Shrieking Shack, then Peter wasn't bound by a real magical contract
to Harry. Ditto Snape to James in this scenario, which is why I feel
that James hadn't been in on it from the beginning. The reason I was
so long-winded with my first" - here she paused, and glared at
Marina - "explanation was that I felt that the Prank had to be the
catalyst for the emotional changes which take place in the group
dynamic over the next five years. It's the latest piece of
information about the Marauders that we have before Peter betrays
James, and because it hasn't been discussed in canon fully, I think
that there's got to be something more to it. In Arcum's version,
there's no explanation of any moral turnaround in James. There
doesn't necessarily have to be one, as James carried on hexing Snape
after the Prank (the sensitive wee bugger), but this version of James
isn't one that Hagrid etc. would describe in such glowing terms. And
Marina's explanation, which cuts out Peter and Lily completely,
offers no potential for motivation in Peter to betray or Lily to fall
in love. Again, it doesn't have to - I'm still working on the fact
that this is the last piece of information we have about the group.
But Lily has to understand the danger that both James and Snape were
in if the Prank is the point where she begins to see James in another
light - and the fact that Remus was a werewolf wasn't ever disclosed
to the rest of the school. And as for Sirius," Kirstini sighed sadly.
Marina bristled.
"Sirius isn't stupid. He couldn't be plotting murder for weeks
without realising that he was plotting murder."
"Well, he managed not to realise it in the time it took to come up
with the scheme, put it into practise, have James informed of what he
had done (somehow), and have Snape rescued. Nope, I'm sticking with
my original idea on this one. Sixteen" (she extended a friendly
tongue at Marina) "year-old Sirius was such a superior, oblivious
creature that he'd never really thought about wee Snivelley as a
human being. His life wasn't an issue, up until the point where it
became endangered. Actually, I think he comes out of my version
slightly better than he does in yours. At least in mine it can all be
attributed to *adolescent* stupidity..."
Something in Marina's face at this point made Kirstini wonder if
perhaps she'd gone too far with that one. She took a couple oof steps
back, and adjusted her scarves round her neck.
"And I'm really, really ill." she said, pathetically.
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