A Case of Sirius Neglect? (was Re: Sirius - who is right?)
darkkitten2
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Thu Jul 31 00:03:01 UTC 2003
No: HPFGUIDX 74273
I've also been reading this thread with interest. Fantastic discussion!
Re the issue of abuse/neglect of Sirius (Warning - long!):
IMO, Sirius has been rather neglected since Dumbledore etc. first found out he was
innocent in PoA. Saving Sirius from getting his soul sucked by the Dementors at the
last minute was a wonderful thing indeed, but if you're going to damage a character
as badly as JKR has Sirius, he's going to need a little following-up afterward. Consider
the condition Sirius is in, mentally and physically, at the end of PoA. I don't have my
copy with me at the moment, but as far as I can recall:
- Sirius has been out of Azkaban for some months but has spent almost every bit of
that time in dog form, and he's terribly emaciated
- He's a bit out of his mind already, willing to do almost anything to get to Peter
(breaking Ron's leg, manhandling Harry, slashing the Fat Lady etc.)
- He drags Ron/Scabbers under the Willow in a big scuffle, then gets attacked by
Harry, Ron and Hermione. Harry succeeds in throwing him against a wall and hitting
him in the face several times, so that he's bruised and bleeding
- He and Lupin then perfom a number of spells (more effort) and have a very
emotional confrontation with Peter
- Lupin transforms, and Sirius takes what appear to be some fairly serious wounds
from Lupin's werewolf form while defending Harry and company
- Peter escapes and Sirius chases him, can't catch him and therefore fails in the entire
purpose of his life for the past 12 years
- He then gets exposed to a mob of a hundred Dementors who are out to suck his
soul.
This adds up to a pretty rough day for Sirius. It seems a bit much to ask him, within
the hour, to get on the back of a hippogriff (in an earlier scene we see Harry find out
that riding one isn't the easiest thing in the world), fly off to parts unknown, and hide
out alone from the forces that are still trying to kill him, for an indefinite time period.
I mean, is he even going to be able to stay on Buckbeak's back? At this moment,
Sirius is in no condition to be responsible for his own safety.
PoA says that Dumbledore talks to Sirius and listens to his story, but it isn't noted
that anyone ever bothers with a healing spell or two, or even a bar of chocolate. A
hundred dementors is an awful lot, especially for someone just out of Azkaban! How
about a loaner wand at the very least? Yes, the timetable was short and Sirius was
running for his life, but surely someone could arrange a little assistance, even if it
took a planned meeting someplace later?
I do love the escape scene, and I understand that fussing with practical details like
this in the middle of it would have messed up its rhythm. Still, JKR never goes back
and fills in the gap. Probably we are supposed to assume that Dumbledore or
someone else cast a couple of healing spells on Sirius and at least gave him a glass of
water. But it's never actually stated.
More significantly, the "neglected Sirius" theme continues in GoF. At the end of PoA/
beginning of GoF, Sirius has (rather amazingly, considering where we left him!) got
himself together enough to purchase godfatherly gifts, send them off via pretty
tropical birds, put on some weight, and wash and cut his hair. (The state of Sirius's
hair seems a pretty reliable barometer of his mental health, perhaps that's what
everyone ought to have been paying attention to?) (g)
But whatever solution Sirius has found (offscreen help? who knows?) is not a
permanent one. This is the best we ever see him looking, and it doesn't last all that
long. When Sirius finds out about Harry's scar hurting, he instantly abandons his
current hiding place and returns to the Hogwarts vicinity. And by the time Harry, Ron
and Hermione visit him, midway through the book, Sirius is pretty much back where
he started in PoA, living in a cave half-starved, wearing the same gray robes he had
on when he escaped from Azkaban, spending most of his time in dog form, still
apparently wandless, and most telling of all (g), his hair is back to being long and
hopelessly tangled.
And although Sirius is in this state in Dumbledore's backyard (Dumbledore knows
he's there and has even recommended that particular cave), no one at Hogwarts or in
the Order appears to be sending as much as a basket of food scraps Sirius's way
(except Harry).
Yes, Sirius is back at Hogwarts almost certainly against Dumbledore's wishes. Yes, he
periodically acts like an immature git. Yes, lurking in the forest eating rats turns out
to be less than effective in terms of actually protecting Harry, makes Sirius's own
situation worse and generally wasn't the brightest of ideas. And yes, Sirius can be
annoying and extremely difficult to help. But his situation is pathetic enough that it
seems unconscionable not to try. (Where the heck is Lupin?!)
Sirius looks at his most fulfilled (if still not at his physical best) at the end of GoF,
when Dumbledore includes him in re-forming the Order (irritated as Sirius is to find
Snape a part of it) and gives him his mission to alert everyone. And at the beginning
of OotP, unhappy and unstable as Sirius seems, he's at least in human form, being
included in Order meetings, having conversations with people and even eating once
in a while (though combing his hair still seems to be optional). All of this is, IMO,
something of an improvement over living in a cave.
I really thought things were going to improve for Sirius there for a while at the
beginning of OotP. As someone else pointed out (Marina, I think?) it really wouldn't
have taken all that much to make Sirius less unhappy, just some kind of useful task
he could do for the Order without leaving the house, not to mention some
companionship. But again, Sirius is neglected. Not maliciously; he's just overlooked.
No one has time to notice (with the continuing exception of Harry perhaps) that Sirius
is still in no shape to manage his life entirely on his own. Sirius has been through
awful physical and mental trauma, and no matter how much he hates the fact, he is in
need of help before he can strengthen and repair himself. Sadly, he never gets it.
darkkitten
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