[HPforGrownups] Re: Mark Evans
liz
liz at studylink.com
Fri Nov 14 13:03:18 UTC 2003
No: HPFGUIDX 84997
Astrofiammante wrote:
> In a way, I hope I am wrong, because it would be entertaining if he
> does turn up at Hogwarts as the key to solving the whole Evans family
> mystery:
>
> "Harry looked up suddenly as he heard Professor McGonagall's voice
> say: 'Evans, Mark'. A small, oddly familiar auburn-haired boy with
> bright green eyes looked very apprehensive as the Hat descended on
> his head. Without a second's pause, it roared: 'Gryffindor'. The
> table around Harry exploded in cheers..."
Ooooh, I like it. But what about:
"Harry looked up suddenly as he heard Professor McGonagall's voice say:
'Evans, Mark'. A small, oddly familiar auburn-haired boy with bright green
eyes looked very apprehensive as the Hat descended on his head. Without a
second's pause, it roared: 'Slytherin'. The table across from Harry exploded
in cheers..."
Might be more interesting. Also a way for Harry to get more friendly with
some Slytherins?? Or imagine all the ways Draco could torment Harry by
becoming big brother/mentor to his long lost cousin (or whatever he may be).
Liz
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