Unreliable narrator (Was: Snape's stalling)
pippin_999
foxmoth at qnet.com
Tue Nov 9 17:08:02 UTC 2004
No: HPFGUIDX 117478
--- In HPforGrownups at yahoogroups.com, "justcarol67"
<justcarol67 at y...> wrote:
>
> My concern is with the unreliable narrator. I'm trying to explain
that he or she is not Harry but nevertheless generally tells the
story from his POV, and that Harry's view of events and
characters has all too often proven incorrect. My argument has to
do with *narrative technique*, not with conspiracy theory. I am not
and have never been a conspiracy theorist. I don't believe in
ESE!Lupin or Puppetmaster! Dumbledore or TT!Ron or any other
speculation-based theory. I do believe in close reading, in
interpretation and analysis of the text, in distrusting what most
characters say and withholding judgment of characters based
on Harry's perceptions. I'm arguing that we need to distinguish
between a character's words and actions and Harry's perception
of those words and actions.<
Pippin:
Perhaps we should also distinguish between the character's
words and actions, and the reader's perception of those words
and actions.
It seems to me that what I shall call Fanon!Lupin is as much the
product of reader speculation, conjecture and outright disregard
of canon as that admittedly noncanonical beast Fanon!Draco.
By Fanon!Lupin, I mean the adorable werewolf cub, who
*didn't lead his friends to become animagi
*would never work against someone who helped him
*suffered the loss of his closest friends in a single day
*thought Sirius must be innocent all along
*simply forgot that it was the night of the full moon
*was surprised when Snape appeared from under the Invisibility
cloak despite having run right past it earlier
*has no anger against the current regime
Whereas canon Lupin: all refs US hardcover
-was a "fully grown werewolf" when transformed - PoA 357 ch 18
- "led three fellow students into becoming Animagi illegally" -PoA
355 ch 18
-"betrayed [Dumbledore's] trust while I was at school" -PoA 356
ch 18 and says, "I haven't changed." ibid
-was apparently so distrusted by Sirius *and James* that rather
than confronting him with their suspicions that he was a spy,
they set a trap for him.
"Remus!" Pettigrew squeaked..."You don't believe this...wouldn't
Sirius have told you if *they'd* changed the plan" (emphasis
mine) -PoA 373 ch 19
-"thought Sirius killed Peter" p351 ch 18
-"convinced [himself] that Sirius was getting into the school
using dark arts he learned from Voldemort" p 356 ch 18
- never tells us why he didn't realize he was going to transform
- expresses no surprise at the sudden appearance of Snape in
the Shrieking Shack
-has spoken against Umbridge "I know she's a nasty piece of
work though -- you should hear Remus talk about her." OOP 302
ch 14
Apropos of that last point, can anyone find some canon where
Lupin says anything critical of Voldemort? Calls him the most
evil wizard who ever existed, or says he's the foulest thing that
infests the earth, or something like that?
I realize it's very unconventional to make a sympathetic character
the villain, especially in what some of us think of as a children's
book. In that sense, considering Lupin as a potential villain
requires a subversive reading. But JKR has said all along that
her bad guys are not conventional black hats.
Pippin
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