Does JKR dislike writing about Quidditch matches? (long)
Nathaniel
natti_shafer at yahoo.com
Wed Jul 6 09:47:24 UTC 2005
No: HPFGUIDX 132097
Throughout the five books JKR takes great pains to describe in
excruciating detail every moment of the Quidditch matches -- as long
as Harry is playing. It seems to be a decision that Jo made early
and then soon regretted. Throughout the books she seems to take
great pains in order to keep Harry from actually participating in
these Quidditch matches.
The first match Harry plays in (in PS) is important to the plot. It
is the moment when Quirrel decides to hex Harry's broom. In order
for this important plot point to not seem too jarring, Jo wisely felt
it necessary to give a blow by blow account of the whole match. It
seems to be a decision she regrets, because every Quidditch match
Harry has competed in has had a similiar narrative (complete with
commentary by Lee Jordan.) The second match for Harry is much less
important to the plot. Snape officiates, but that is the only
important plot point. Consequently, Jo has Harry end the match in
record time. The pattern of Jo trying to avoid giving an account of
the matches has begun. Harry misses the final match of the season
ostensibly because he's unconscience in the hospital wing, but the
real reason seems to be that Jo doesn't want to write about another
match.
Harry's second year has the same pattern. The first match is
important to the plot -- Dobby creates the rogue bludger and breaks
Harry's arm. But none of the other potential matches would push the
plot forward so Jo simply cancels the rest of the season. This seems
to me a blatant attempt to avoid writing about them the danger is
from within the school building -- not the Quidditch pitch.
PoA is the only book where Harry plays in all three matches that he
is supposed to play in and it is the lone anomaly where Jo describes
a match that is not central to the plot. The first match introduces
Cedric and shows the destruction of Harry's beloved Nimbus. The
second and third matches are not particularly important to the
plot, though. The second match introduces Cho Chang and shows Malfoy
and co. trying to sabatoge Harry, but these do not necessarily have
to take place at a Quidditch match per se. The final match has no
bearing on the plot except to show Harry (and Wood) finally win the
Quidditch Cup. PoA is the lone exception to my theory.
In GoF Jo cleverly uses the Quidditch world Cup as exposition to
three important things: introducing Krum, introducing veela, and
introducing leprachaun gold. Having written an entire chapter on one
Quidditch match, Jo seems to tire of the whole idea and decides to
cancel the entire Quidditch season. This seems particularly lame
(and blatant) because the hosting of the Triwizard tournament does
not seem to really interfere with the play of Quidditch. Sure the
final task takes place on the Quidditch pitch, but honestly, we're
only talking about six Quidditch matches all season. Would it really
have been that difficult to move the one or two matches that would
have taken place that month to another Saturday?
And finally we have OotP in which Harry and the Weasleys lose their
tempers at Draco and are banished from the Quidditch team.
Consequently, we get only a perfunctory description of Ginny's catch
of the golden snitch. (No blow by blow account from Lee Jordan
narrated in the book.) And the final match, in which Ron finally
gets the limelight takes places off camera because of the Grawp
incident.
After five books then, in which Harry could have potentially played
in fifteen matches, he has only played in seven. 7/15 seems to be an
extremely poor ratio considering he is a star player, and he's only
missed one due to injury. For a sport about which the WW cares so
deeply, they do seem to cancel an awful lot of matches. All seven of
Harry's matches are described in great detail. None of the three he
misses but that are not cancelled are given more than a cursory
description. Five matches (Five! out of a potential fifteen -- fully
one third!) are cancelled.
It seems to me that Jo has decided that she MUST write in great
detail about all of Harry's matches, and yet she doesn't enjoy doing
it. I think it would have been perfectly acceptable for her to give
much more brief descriptions of the quidditch matches and therefore
better maintained credibility. I have not yet seen a plausible
reason as to why Quidditch couldn't be played during the Triwizard
Tournament. I think the real answer to that Frequently Asked
Question is that Jo didn't want to write about three more matches
that book.
Thoughts?
-Nathaniel
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