[HPforGrownups] Re: Yet another prophecy question

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No: HPFGUIDX 130893

Geoff:

>"born as the seventh month dies... and the Dark Lord will mark him as his equal but he will have power the Dark Lord knows not.."
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>Hells:
>For example, this part does not sound right to me, it is grammatically incorrect and flows very badly. It would look and sound much better if there was proper punctuation like her other prophesy did.
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Sorry, but what about the grammar is incorrect?  I know that "neither 
can live while the other survives" is a bit wonky (and likely 
deliberately so) but I'm not seeing any grammatical errors in the above 
quote.   I agree a comma before "but" would be nice, but it's not 
totally necessary, so far as I see it.

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