FF: Poll - Sirius would you bring him back?
bbkkyy55
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Sat Mar 12 08:17:20 UTC 2005
No: HPFGUIDX 125986
I very humbly submit this little exercise. If it never shows up I
won't be surprised, I'm no writer. I just really don't want Harry to
totally die. He could maybe go "into the west" like Frodo, but I
believe in happy endings, after all is done and said.
PS: If this is illegal please delete it promptly, and I promise not
to do is again.
Harry Potter's Final Battle - bbkkyy's dumb version.
His head hurt so bad he could hardly focus to see, and he was
shaking and felt like he was going to retch again. He didn't see how
he could go on any more. If the others weren't here maybe he would
just have given up. Death would be such a relief, he was worn out,
so sick of it all. Harry glanced to his right. He could see Ron on
the ground cradling Hermione in his arms. They were injured, but
they were still alive. Ron was whispering something to Hermione and
was protecting her with his body between her and Voldemort.
Voldemort was staring at Harry. Harry knew this was it. What should
he do? He knew Ginny was just to his left and a little in back of
him. Voldemort glared at him and grinned a wicked grin. He started
to raise his wand. Then Harry saw Voldemort's eye's glance at where
Ginny was standing. He was going to kill Ginny! Harry heard the
killing curse's starting phrase. Harry screamed something and aimed
his wand at Voldemort as he leaped to the side to shield Ginny from
the blast. He was moving in slow motion, he could see the green
light of Voldemort's curse coming right at him as he started to
fall. It was just like his old dream of the green light and the high
pitched laughter. All he could think of was Ginny. He had to
protect Ginny. The green light hit him and everything went black.
He was floating in a warm soft blackness. Ahead of him, far
off he could see a white light appearing. As he floated closer it
became brighter. It was so peaceful and warm, nothing hurt. He had
never felt so good. The light was coming nearer now and he could see
people waiting there for him. It was his mom and dad, and all his
family he had seen seven years ago in the Mirror of Erised. He felt
so good he wanted to laugh aloud. There was Sirius and Lupin too.
They were all looking at him and smiling, waiting for him. Then far,
far off he could hear a voice calling his name. It sounded like
Ginny. She was sobbing and calling his name. He knew now he could
decide. He stopped moving and looked back at his family and Sirius
and Lupin. They were still smiling and watching him. They knew what
he would do. It was okay. They would wait for him. How could he
leave Ginny and Ron and Hermione? They would be so upset if he
died. He wanted to go back. He knew it would be painful, knew this
place was better, but he would be here again someday. He would go
back.
It was getting darker. He wasn't floating any more. He
could feel the hard ground under him and his head was hurting as
usual. Also his leg hurt and he couldn't move it, it must be
broken. But he had felt pain before. He also felt Ginny holding his
hand and heard her sobbing and calling his name over and over. He
took a long slow quivering breath. Where was Voldemort? He opened
his eyes and saw Ginny looking at him and crying, now with joy. Big
silver tears were running down her beautiful freckled cheeks. "Where
is Voldemort, Ginny" he asked. "Oh Harry, you're alive! You've done
it Harry! Voldemort is dead! You killed him! Your patronus charm
hit him and there was this bright white light. When it faded He was
lying there dead. I guess all that good feeling from your patronus
was too much for him. It was tremendous." Harry raised his self up
to look at the place Voldemort had been standing. There he was,
laying crumpled and ugly, not moving on the ground. It was over. He
sat up and gave Ginny a great big hug. He had a feeling they would
be hugging quite often for many, many years to come. He looked over
at Ron and Hermione. They were grinning at him through their
injuries. Ron gave Harry a thumbs up sign with his remaining good
hand.
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