Dark Phoenix
katssirius
katbofaye at aol.com
Sun Apr 23 18:33:30 UTC 2006
No: HPFGUIDX 151372
I like this theory a lot. It is based on complex emotions and an
intelligent plan. The problem I see with it is I do not think JKR
has got it in her. I would have believed it until Book 6. This is
her first story and she's having a hard time pulling it together
towards an ending. Book 6 impressed me as a set up for a contrived
ending that could not be foreseen. The introduction of Voldemort's
backstory when he is a character of no interest (even after the back
story) wasted 50% of that book. As you point out Snape has always
been the most interesting character and we could have used the story
of his school days or his time with the Death Eaters. JKR could
have given us more on the Marauders, Lily, the Dursleys, almost any
Order member. These are all interesting characters and she has
thrown out hints but never followed up on them. There is not time
in the last book to do it all.
I agree Snape is the hero. I think DD's picture in the headmaster's
office is the one point I have not seen argued away concerning his
death. Other than that I like your story best I just do not think
JKR has it in her. She must have realized she needed eight books
and instead of giving up some of the unnecessary Voldemort backstory
she sacrificed the backstories that are constantly discussed on
websites and is the juice for most of the fanfiction.
katssirius
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