Dark Phoenix

katssirius katbofaye at aol.com
Sun Apr 23 18:33:30 UTC 2006


No: HPFGUIDX 151372

I like this theory a lot.  It is based on complex emotions and an 
intelligent plan.  The problem I see with it is I do not think JKR 
has got it in her.  I would have believed it until Book 6.  This is 
her first story and she's having a hard time pulling it together 
towards an ending.  Book 6 impressed me as a set up for a contrived 
ending that could not be foreseen.  The introduction of Voldemort's 
backstory when he is a character of no interest (even after the back 
story) wasted 50% of that book.  As you point out Snape has always 
been the most interesting character and we could have used the story 
of his school days or his time with the Death Eaters.  JKR could 
have given us more on the Marauders, Lily, the Dursleys, almost any 
Order member.  These are all interesting characters and she has 
thrown out hints but never followed up on them.  There is not time 
in the last book to do it all.  

I agree Snape is the hero.  I think DD's picture in the headmaster's 
office is the one point I have not seen argued away concerning his 
death.  Other than that I like your story best I just do not think 
JKR has it in her.  She must have realized she needed eight books 
and instead of giving up some of the unnecessary Voldemort backstory 
she sacrificed the backstories that are constantly discussed on 
websites and is the juice for most of the fanfiction.

katssirius










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