The last word ("scar")
jkoney65
jkoney65 at yahoo.com
Fri Jul 6 01:24:25 UTC 2007
No: HPFGUIDX 171336
>
> MusicalBetsy:
<snip>
> My sentence is this:
> "Harry was still the same person he always was, maybe a little
> wiser, with the only difference being that he no longer had a scar."
>
> Not very good, but you get the main idea.
>
I've always thought it would be a bit different, something like
He was so much more than the boy with the scar.
jkoney65
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