Plot Points: Kreacher's Arrival in the Battle.

[Steve]

No: HPFGUIDX 178977

Just changing the subject a bit. I suppose I'm just complaining
but I see it as more of a comment.

I thought Kreacher's coming out (no not like /that/) was a 
little weak. How did Kreacher get there? When did he get there?
What was his motivation?

I thought the story would have worked better, when in the
room of requirements Ron expressed concern about the House
Elves, if Harry had called Kreacher and told him to go 
warn the other Elves that they were in danger, and that if
they chose to flee they could.

Now we have a reason for Kreacher to be there, we have a 
reason for him to talk to the house-elves, and we have a 
logical sequence that could have lead Kreacher to rally 
the elves to help the good guys.


Anybody have any other minor plot points for which you
can see a better way for them to have been worked out?

Just a thought.

Steve/bboyminn