Hmmm. What's your favorite *now*?
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juli17 at aol.com
Sat May 31 21:59:41 UTC 2008
No: HPFGUIDX 183092
> Mike:
> OTOH, the choices he made while at Hogwarts, when he should have
> thrived, made me despise the adult Snape even more. He had proved
> that he was an exceptionally bright youth, he had a strong willed
> guiding friend in Lily, and he *still* chose Voldemort and the
Death Eaters; that led eventually to his life of muted desperation.
Potioncat:
I find this part of the plot, the most difficult to understand. It
does sort of mirror a plot found in Southern historical fiction
stories set in either Ante-Bellum period or the time of segregation.
But I don't think there's enough information to show us why he made
those choices.
Julie:
This is a problem for me also, but where I have the problem is with Lily and
Sev's
friendship. It's true that here we don't really have enough information
either. But in
my reading I don't really see where Lily was a "guiding" friend to Severus,
at least
in any manner that showed she was in any way determined to offer him other
options. Sure she was "good" in the sense that she didn't hang out with
future
DEs, but she was in a different House, and we don't have any real indication
that she and Severus spent a great deal of quality time together at
Hogwarts. In
fact it seems quite the opposite to me, as none of the Marauders nor anyone
else
who was at Hogwarts during that time (including various professors) ever
brings
up the oh-so-close "best friends" relationship between Lily and Severus.
They
got together enough for Lily to chide Severus about his Slytherin
housemates,
but we don't see any moments where they are openly enjoying each other's
friendship at Hogwarts, the opinions of others be damned. And why not?
I feel JKR dropped the ball somewhat here, and I know it was partly because
she
wanted to keep their BF status a secret. Thus no mention of it throughout
the books,
and a Pensieve scene where Lily seems to have absolutely no personal concern
for
Severus or his feelings (barely avoiding laughing at him hanging upside down
with his
grey underwear on display, protesting the Marauders actions on a basis of
principle
rather than with any specific indignation for her supposed BF, etc). But in
DH JKR
could have shown Lily actually being supportive rather than simply
judgmental (e.g.,
"Sev, I'm really worried about you. Let's go get a couple of butterbeers and
talk, and
I don't care WHO sees us together. I'm your friend, and I want to be there
for you."
rather than "Your friends in Slytherin are evil jerks. And quit whining
about what the
Marauders did to you. If you shape up, let me know, just not when I'm busy
with my
Gryffindor pals."
Okay, I exaggerated and paraphrased (a lot) but you get the idea. It
wouldn't have
been hard for JKR to insert a moment or two, or a sentence or two showing
Lily really
caring deeply about Severus and his feelings. This would have certainly
explained better
why Severus was so fond of her (though with his damaged psyche, I guess him
being
infatuated with Lily's imagined perfection and blinded to the fact that she
was no more
or less compassionate or purehearted--nor any more likely to love him--than
any other
teenage girl makes sense. It just doesn't do much for Lily). It would have
also proved
that Lily truly and deeply cared about Severus, something that just doesn't
come across
to me in DH. OTOH, Lily being nothing truly special as a "best" friend
(.i.e. exceptionally
compassionate or determined about maintaining their friendship), does fit
better with Severus
falling so easily in with those who interacted with him on a daily basis,
his fellow Slytherins.
And Mike, I'm not arguing whether you should despise Severus Snape more for
the choices
he made as a student at Hogwarts. I'm just arguing whether Lily's influence
involved either
enough concern or effort to have the effect on Severus that you think it
would, which would
in effect offer him a very attractive and viable option besides following
the same destructive
path as his Slytherin friends. I don't think that level of influence (or
interest) was there on
Lily's part.
Julie, who wanted to see Lily express one moment of true affection for
Severus as a person
and friend, but didn't get it.
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