some replies which are direct but off topic

kempermentor iam.kemper at gmail.com
Mon Apr 13 21:07:59 UTC 2009


No: HPFGUIDX 186207

> Lynda:
> ...It has more to do with the age of reader the writer
> is supposedly writing to rather than anything else.
> When you are writing for preteens, you write differently than if you are writing for teens or adults, and you do not include such things as where a young man's or a young woman's eyes end up looking unintentionally.

Kemper now:
So joking about your (general) anus is appropriate in the preteen setting but actively avoiding staring at tahs is a little much. 

Please expand on that.

Kemper





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