[HPforGrownups] Re: Teeth, braces, and the English Language or variations thereof.
Shelley Gardner
k12listmomma at comcast.net
Fri Apr 29 21:14:28 UTC 2011
No: HPFGUIDX 190333
> Your point is well taken, Geoff and I would agree under most circumstances. I do have one niggling question, though. Wouldn't Hermione have mentioned that she wore a brace or the presence of a brace on her teeth have been mentioned during the books if she was wearing one? I don't think buck teeth like Hermione's would have used merely a retainer she wore at night. So the presence of a brace on her teeth would have been noticeable and should have been mentioned. Rowling is not that poor a writer that she would leave out that detail!
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> Lynda
I disagree on that last point- Rowling has plenty of other small details
she overlooks, and it is well known that as she wrote the later books
she would look up some facts from previous books on the internet so she
could try and keep things consistent, after she learned how detail
oriented her readers were. It's not a matter of "poor writer" as much as
juggling many balls and she dropped this small one. It's not a major
plot point, really. Maybe she thought she had mentioned braces with
Hermione's buck teeth before. It's such a tiny detail that is forgivable
with respect to the story line, unlike Lupin's changes with the moon cycle.
Shelley
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