Recommended Reading FAQ

Jeralyn voicelady at mymailstation.com
Mon Jan 15 17:08:45 UTC 2001


--- In HP4GU-FAQ at egroups.com, "Jim Flanagan" <jamesf at a...> wrote:
> Second, the introduction is written in the first person singular 
("I").  It either needs to be signed by the author or changed so that 
it does not reflect the point of view of a single person (e.g., 
passive voice). 

Jim -
 Thanks for your input.  I re-read the opening paragraph, and decided 
that I liked it too much to change it, so I added a note at the 
bottom of the page indicating that I had written it.  I also included 
your recommendation, along with 2 new ones that came in this past 
week. I've updated, and I'm going to reload it into our file section.

Thanks again.

Jeralyn





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