Helping JKR edit -- OoP Cliffnotes Version

[Cindy C. <cindysphinx@comcast.net>]

Amy wrote:

> I can go you several words better.  Deletions in
> [brackets], additions in *asterisks.*

Order of the Phoenix, by J.K. Rowling, edited by Cindy

"Harry went to school.  Divination sucked.  Ron argued with 
Hermione.  Hermione argued with Harry.  Harry argued with Ron.  
Snape killed Hermione and Karkaroff.  Neville spilled his guts.  
Hagrid and Dumbledore killed each other."  

<takes bow>

Cindy -- thinking of all the ink this would save