hi - new here...sorry if this gets duplicated

[tyger3d]

Hello,
i tried sending my message eariler but the internet explorer died. 
anyhootz: I'm new to the list. I'm from NYC. I've read all the HP 
books and started my own fanfic based on the story.

i've been looking for people who could take a minute or two or an 
hour or so to critize my work harshly...my story is called Harry 
Potter and the Secret Society and is posted on Fanfic.net: 
http://fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=543269

I've hit a nasty little writer's block and i could use some helpful 
criticism.

i know most people don't like the idea of new characters but i choose 
this subject because i knew that people didn't like the idea...i want 
to see if i can do a good job on a tough subject people dont like and 
end up making them like it...i hope you guys could help me out a 
little.

~tyger o.Ô

P.S.
I enjoy reading humor/angst fanfics. so if you have any i would 
gladly read them. ^_^