hi...in need of some harsh reviews for my fanfic....>.<

[tyger3d]

Hello,
I'm new to the list. I'm from NYC. I've read all the HP books and 
started my own fanfic based on the story.

i've been looking for people who could take a minute or two or an 
hour or so to critize my work...my story is called Harry Potter and 
the Secret Society and is posted on Fanfic.net: 
http://fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=543269

I've hit a nasty little writer's block and i could use some helpful 
criticism.

now i know people out there don't like fanfics with new 
characters...but this is why i need a little criticism ^_^ i really 
want to improve on my writing more than anything else...so i too a 
subject that most people would hate to read and see if i can do a 
good job on it...i hope you guys could help me out a little.

anyhootz

~tyger o.Ô

P.S.
I enjoy reading humor/angst fanfics. so if you have any i would 
gladly read them. ^_^