Plot hole - POV

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Wed May 9 04:43:14 UTC 2001


No: HPFGUIDX 18424

--- In HPforGrownups at y..., "Amy Z" <aiz24 at h...> wrote:
> Stacy wrote:
> 
> >Everything furthers the plot. And 
> >that was the hole; Icicle wasn't needed. She didn't further the 
plot. 
> >And so a lot of time was spent in cutting her out.
> 
> I don't think so.  It sounds possible that she DID further the 
plot; 
> she did what Rita now does for it--get private information out into 
> the public.  For some reason we don't know, she didn't work and the 
> reporter character had to be expanded.

That wasn't quite what I meant. What happened, I think, is that 
Icicle and Rita ended up serving the same purpose, and furthering the 
plot in the same way. My guess is that Jo was forced to choose 
between the two, and she chose Rita (for whatever reason -- probably 
because she was more fun to write).

Stacy





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