TBAY: MATCHINGARMCHAIR: the Debate Rages On (WAS: Yellow Flags and Jobberkno
cindysphynx
cindysphynx at comcast.net
Mon May 20 21:53:19 UTC 2002
No: HPFGUIDX 38921
The crowd had thinned considerably after Cindy's outburst. Eloise
still dozed in her own comfy MATCHINGARMCHAIR. Debbie sat bolt
upright in her non-descript meeting room chair, wiping the inky
black liquid from her writing tablet. Jtdogberry, a newcomer,
gathered his things, muttering that someone was going to get hurt if
this kept up.
There, Cindy thought. That Jobberknoll variant ought to satisfy
Elkins once and for all. And all it cost was a perfectly good
sleeve of crackers and some warm processed cheese. Not bad for a
day's work.
Cindy strode back to the refreshments table, this time selecting a
package of Zwieback and a juice box because, after all, Harry Potter
is just a children's book series. Elkins sheepishly retrieved her
Yellow Flag and used it to mop the sweat from her upper lip.
Cindy eased herself down into her MATCHINGARMCHAIR. This time, she
did not put her refreshments on her Big paddle. She wanted to be
ready for anything.
******************
Elkins mumbled into the microphone, something about having a
confession to make:
>After all, Elkins had once (as she now recalled with some
> degree of embarrassment) ascribed to the Reverse Memory Charm
>theory herself.
>
> But that had been a long time ago. Back in the halcyon days.
>Back before she and Cindy had been forced to sever their
>engagement. Back before Cindy had grown bitter and started
>carrying around that great big *paddle.*
Cindy nodded knowingly, drifting off into deep thought . . . .
Yes, those were the days. Elkins once embraced the Reverse Memory
Charm enthusiastically with extra exclamation points and
everything. Cindy could quote from those messages, but that would
be unspeakably churlish. Cindy had not forgotten these things. But
people grow. People change. And sometimes . . . sometimes . . .
people grow apart. Oh, sometimes they stray far, far away from
canon in their attempt to find the Right memory charm theory.
Sometimes they even sponsor entire *Symposiums*. But they always
return to their MATCHINGARMCHAIR . . . when the time is right . . .
Elkins is speaking again. Something about dementors and eggs:
>But you've still got the Egg and the Dementor to deal with. The
> Jobberknoll doesn't fix those. If you really want to convert me
>to your Reverse Memory Charm cause, then you're going to have to
>find some way around the Egg and the Dementor. Otherwise, I just
>can't go for it.
Ah, the Egg and the Dementor. Is that all? Well, why didn't you
*say* so!
Let's tackle the Egg first. What's the problem there?
Elkins:
>Because even if you turn the volume knob all the way down
>to "intermittent cries of agony," and the frequency dial all the
>way to "only when Snape picks on Neville in Potions class," you're
>still left with the problem that Neville ought to *know* what
>people in pain sound like, and that they really don't
>sound the slightest bit like a ghost orchestra playing on the
>musical saw -- which is what the mermaid song from Harry's Egg
>sounds like. So the Egg Problem still stands.
Well, I have some personal experience in this area. Over the years,
I have tortured *many* people within an inch of their lives, and if
you go at it *just* right, if you *really* know what you're doing,
once they stop saying actual *words* and stop with all the
*begging*, they do in fact make this freakish high-pitched squeal
that sounds exactly . . .
<Naama gathered her things and quickly took up a position by the
emergency exit.>
<Cindy stops abruptly, frowning. Maybe this isn't the best approach
with so many *witnesses* around. Perhaps this would be a good time
to pull out a canon.>
People, people, people. The Egg is Not A Problem for
MATCHINGARMCHAIR. The Egg's wail is described as "the most horrible
noise, a loud and screechy wailing" like the ghost orchestra at
Nearly Headless Nick's deathday party playing musical saws. When
Harry opens the Egg in the bathtub, the wailing, screeching sound is
described as "incomprehensible." When Harry drops it on the stairs,
it again is said to sound like "wailing."
And what does the cry of the tiny Jobberknoll sound like: "A long
scream made up of every sound it ever heard, regurgitated
backward." Gee, that might sound a lot like a horrible noise, a
loud and screechy wailing that would be *incomprehensible*.
The Egg's screeching sounds to Neville just like the death scream of
the Jobberknoll. No wonder poor Neville likens it to the sound of
someone being tortured! The Jobberknoll death rattle is what Neville
is reacting to in that scene in GoF, not the actual cries of his
parents, which would be *plenty* comprehensible.
Elkins interrupts, which under the circumstances shows
uncharacteristic bravery:
>It also doesn't fix the Dementor problem. If Neville had a Reverse
> Memory Charm, then the Dementor on the train at the beginning of
>PoA really should have been able to dredge that memory up for him.
>He would have been reliving the experience of having witnessed his
> parents being tortured. And if he really had been reliving that
> experience, then I just can't imagine that he wouldn't have
> been in far worse shape than Ginny. Or Harry, for that matter.
>But he wasn't. He was doing better than either of them. Harry
>passes out. Ginny looks "as bad as Harry feels." But Neville's
>just pale and shaken. So that's a problem too.
Ah, that's not a problem either, because that is exactly as it
should be. I challenge the premise that Neville should have a more
severe reaction than Harry. Neville watched his parents tortured,
not killed. He still goes to see them. And nothing in canon
suggests that Neville's life was ever in danger that night.
Harry, on the other hand, was practically blasted out of his
screaming mother's arms by the Most Evil Dark Wizard who ever
lived. As the house collapsed around Harry's head, Voldemort tried
to kill Harry, too. Voldemort was then vaporized on the spot, while
Harry received a great gash on his forehead and the ability to speak
the Dark Language Parseltongue. If you add in that awful link that
Harry seems to have with Voldemort, it is no wonder that Harry fares
so poorly against dementors.
As for Ginny, she suffered at the hands of Tom Riddle, who is . . .
Voldemort. She came within minutes of dying as the life was slowly
drained from her. In contrast, Neville watched others suffer at the
hands of wizards far less powerful than Riddle or Voldemort. Ginny's
reaction should be somewhere between Harry and Neville. And it is.
Harry and Ginny react more than Neville to the dementor on the train
because they both survived near-death experiences at the hands of
Voldemort, whereas Neville merely witnessed an atrocity.
Nah. The Dementor on the train is no trouble. No trouble at all.
So . . . will you convert, Elkins? A deal's a deal, right? ;-)
***************
Cindy reclines back into her MATCHINGARMCHAIR, awaiting Elkins'
conversion that Cindy *knows* must be coming. The Egg objection?
Defeated. The Dementor objection? Defeated. The Yellow Flag
violation? Defeated. Surely that should be the *end*, after all of
these months of terrible Memory Charm conflict.
But what on Earth is this?!?
***************
Elkins:
> And just calling Reverse Memory Bangy and FEATHERBOASish isn't
>going to convince me. It is indeed true that the Reverse Memory
>Charm is appealingly cruel and horrid. But it's hardly the *only*
>appealingly cruel and horrid Memory Charm theory floating around in
>the Bay, you know. Many far more stable Memory Charm theories give
>every bit as much Bang for the buck -- and a number of them are
>every last bit as ghastly as the MATCHING ARMCHAIR. Can't I
>interest you in a Ministry Cover-up instead? One with an option on
>Ever So Evil Moody, perhaps? That one's pretty Bangy. Or how
>about Debbie's Memory Charm Most Foul flavored DEPRECIATION
>variant? That one has Bang *and* cruelty! Won't you at least try
>it on for size?
Ah, misdirection. Elkins underestimates Cindy.
*No way* is Cindy going for any of those alternative Memory Charm
theories because, aside from the *plethora* of yellow flag
violations in some of them, they are all sizzle and no Bang. No
Bang at all. Lots of allegations of corruption and collusion and
such, that's true, but no more so than in MATCHINGARMCHAIR.
In the final analysis, though, we're talking about that same old
Traditional Memory Charm that 90% of readers worked out on their
own. Nothing can change the fact that, no matter how much you dress
up those Traditional Memory Charm theories, there's no potential
Bangy plot twist with Memory Charm Neville because we've all been
ready for it since the end of GoF.
Elkins:
> The Reverse Memory Charm actually isn't even all that Bangy to
>begin with, now, is it?
>I mean, the idea that Neville might be hearing his
> parents screaming in torment all the time is indeed cruel, and it
> does indeed please my featherboas, but it isn't really in the
> *slightest* bit Bangy. It doesn't offer any opportunities for a
> Great Character-changing Catalyst, or for a Shocking Revelation,
>or for a Mind-Blowing Plot Twist, or for an Oscar-worthy Cinematic
> Moment, or *any* of that.
>
<snip>
>
> In *fact,* I don't think that Reverse Memory Charm belongs on the
>Big Bang Destroyer at *all*. I say that it's a *Dud,* and should
>be stowed away in the hold until it can prove its merit!
Cindy stops gnawing her Zwieback, wiping the sodden cracker from her
lips. A vein throbs in her temple. Her eyes narrow.
What is the meaning of this? Did I hear *correctly*? Is this an
ill-conceived *mutiny* on the Big Bang Destroyer? A blatant attempt
to throw the Captain into the brig, MATCHINGARMCHAIR and all?
It has come to this, has it? This challenge -- from the Captain
of the Fourth Man Hovercraft of all things! The Hovercraft that is
in such bad condition, such disrepair, that it is *coated* in foul
seagull droppings. The Hovercraft that has been left to drift,
rudderless, as Judy, Debbie and even Eileen's *brother* attempt to
capsize it just for the sport of it?
And now . . . Elkins, the Captain of the pitiful, neglected
Hovercraft, dares declare which theories belong on the Big Bang
Destroyer?!? Oh, this is far worse than spraypainted graffiti, far
worse than the odd seashell tossing, far worse than murdering Pig,
Erroll and Hedwig. . . . This time, Elkins has gone *Too Far*!
<Eloise's pet hedgehog dives under her chair. Avery Disapparates.
Stoned!Harry attempts his Shield Charm. Naama swings open the
emergency exit.>
Let me tell you something! I have been Banging since before you
were *born*! I am the *Queen* of Banging! Reverse Memory Charm
Neville is Bangy if I *say* he is!
And I can prove it! What's the future Bang with every one of the
Memory Charm Neville variants? Hmmmm? That the Charm will be
removed? And? So? What? Neville cries his little eyes out when
he finally remembers what happened? He gets a little *snippy* with
Gran? He sleeps past noon for a few days? That's it? That's all
you've got?
Well, I'll have you know that with Reverse Memory Charm Neville, we
get *multiple* Bangs. We get a huge scene where Harry finally asks
Neville about what happened the night the Longbottoms were tortured
and Neville tells the whole gruesome tale in excruciating detail.
(All of the Memory Charm Neville theories, in contrast, have a scene
where Harry asks Neville about this and Neville gives him a *blank
stare* because he *doesn't remember anything*.) We then get a huge
confrontation where Neville finally confronts his biggest fear
Snape! He demands to know why Snape fed him the Jobberknoll Memory
Potion. Neville. Stands. Up. To. Snape! You can have
weeping, you can have cursing, you can have dueling, you even can
have hand-to-hand combat. The Bang can go on for dramatic page
after dramatic page!
<The door opens slowly. Amanda peers inside, looking for the
Veteran SHIPper's Reunion. Elkins shakes her head slowly and points
across the hall. >
MATCHINGARMCHAIR with optional Jobberknoll variant has it all:
intrigue, unpredictability and rock solid canon foundation. JKR
would approve, Elkins, you know she would. And it's really, really
comfy, too. Go on, try it one more time. And put your feet up.
I'm *sure* there's a GIANTCUSHION around here somewhere. ;-)
***********
Cindy
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