Newer UK Edition of CoS Has Three Changes From Original Edition
erisedstraeh2002
bdmorrp at budget.state.ny.us
Thu Sep 5 18:05:49 UTC 2002
No: HPFGUIDX 43656
I promised the group that I would identify changes made in the UK
adult paperback versions of the books as I make my way through them.
I've just finished CoS, and have three changes to report (I'm
assuming that these are changes from not only the US editions, which
I have, but are also changes from the original UK editions, which I
do not have. I checked the pages on the Lexicon that note the
differences between the US and UK editions, and these changes are not
noted, so I'm presuming that the following are changes from the
original UK editions as well):
(1) When Harry meets Riddle in the Chamber, in the original edition,
Riddle asks Harry "...how is it that you - a *skinny boy* with no
extraordinary magical talent - managed to defeat the greatest wizard
of all time?" In the newer edition, it reads: "...how is it that a
*baby* with no extraordinary magical talent managed to defeat the
greatest wizard of all time?" (Ch. 17, emphases mine to show the
differences).
Since Riddle then goes on to say "How did you escape with nothing but
a scar, while Lord Voldemort's powers were destroyed?", it's clear
that he's referencing when the AK rebounded from Baby!Harry rather
than the Quirrellmort encounter in PS/SS. So the change from "skinny
boy" to "baby" makes sense to me.
(2) As Harry is running from the Basilisk in the Chamber with his
eyes shut, the original edition reads "*Voldemort* was laughing"
while the newer edition reads "*Riddle* was laughing" (Ch. 17,
emphases mine to show the differences).
I think this change is particularly telling - I had previously
noticed that this was the only instance in this chapter where JKR
referred to Riddle as "Voldemort," and had wondered if it was an
error. Apparently it was!
(3) In Chapter 18 of the original edition, when Lucius Malfoy and
Dobby appear in Professor McGonagall's office, it reads: "The elf
was carrying a stained rag with which he was attempting to finish
cleaning Mr. Malfoy's shoes. Apparently Mr. Malfoy had set out in a
great hurry, for not only were his shoes half-polished, but his
usually sleek hair was disheveled. Ignoring the elf bobbing
apologetically around his ankles, he fixed his cold eyes upon
Dumbledore.
'So!' he said 'You've come back. The governors suspended you, but
you still saw fit to return to Hogwarts.'"
The newer edition completely eliminates the paragraph about Dobby
polishing Mr. Malfoy's shoes and when Mr. Malfoy speaks, it
reads: "'So!' said Lucius Malfoy, his cold eyes fixed on
Dumbledore. 'You've come back. The governors suspended you, but you
still saw fit to return to Hogwarts.'"
This change has me baffled - why would Dobby be with Lucius if Dobby
wasn't in the middle of performing a menial task such as shoe-
polishing? Why leave this out?
In addition, the newer edition also has Dumbledore telling Harry that
Voldemort is the last remaining *descendant* of Slytherin (Ch. 18),
but since we all know that JKR has already owned up to that error,
I'm just mentioning it as an aside.
I'll keep you posted as I make my way through PoA!
~Phyllis
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