Plot in OotP (wand confusion)
pippin_999
foxmoth at qnet.com
Mon Nov 22 20:27:31 UTC 2004
No: HPFGUIDX 118340
Nora:
>
> Correct me if I'm wrong, Pippin, because I'm away from my
books--but doesn't Sirius mention that Barty Crouch Sr. sent his
own son to jail, in the conversation in the cave? And talk about
how he didn't last long, but died? So, in a sense, we've been
set up--what is the sneaky revelation is that Barty Jr. is still
alive,
and has been smuggled out. This comes after The Egg and the
Eye, so in a sense, there we've been GIVEN the information we
need--we just don't know what we have.
>
> It's sneaky, yes, but it's also been *explicitly* prepared, so that
when the true answer comes to light, we have something to
flash back to, something very very definite which has become
fully comprehensible, and go "Oh..."
>
> Now, if you'd like to cite me where, textually, this is explicitly
> and clearly done for Wormtail!Lupin, I would love to see it so
that I can be prepared for the ultimate revelation. :)
Pippin:
I'm not sure what you mean by "*explicitly* prepared". Sirius
never refers to young Barty by name. It's 'Crouch's son' all the
way through his account, and young Crouch, like the other
people in the Pensieve scene, is never named there either.
Our clue to young Barty's name is way back in GOF chapter one,
where we learn that the senior Riddles had a grown up son
named Tom -- very confusing, since this Tom is the father of the
Tom Riddle who will become Lord Voldemort. JKR doesn't
explain that explicitly either; you have to work it out, though it
helps to remember that Tom Riddle said in CoS that he was
named after his father.
In the same way, we have Mark Evans, of no importance in our
story except to show that unrelated persons can have the same
name. And where should he appear but in the first chapter of
OOP?
The next clue to Barty is that Sirius tells us that it doesn't make
sense that Crouch was in Snape's office. He couldn't have
apparated there and he's supposedly too ill to go into work. It's
also strange that he would drag himself to Hogwarts in secret
when he could visit openly as a tri-wizard judge. That *should*
have tipped us off, but we don't know that there are two
Barty's yet, and we're thinking it has to be the Barty we know,
because the Marauder's Map never lies.
The next Wormtail clue is also parallel. As various posters
besides me have pointed out, it doesn't make sense that
Wormtail/Peter AK'd Cedric. Peter didn't have his wand in his
hand as he approached, and is notably not dextrous. He's
burdened with baby Voldy. How could he possibly have gotten
his wand out and said the spell before Cedric countered with
Expelliarmus?
As Harry says in OOP, Cedric knew his defensive spells -- the
proof is he got through the maze. That's explicit, isn't it? Peter's
no duellist, we've been told. That's explicit, too. *Maybe* he could
have blown up the Muggles in a sneak attack, but this time he
was facing his adversary.
We don't find out Fake!Moody's real name until *after*
Fake!Moody has been exposed and the use of polyjuice has
been revealed. Snape announces it from the doorway when he
returns with Winky.
If we are shrewd we can realize that Dumbledore has already
guessed, since he sent for Winky before the polyjuice wore off.
And that errand was our final clue, just a few pages before JKR
let the kneazle out of the bag. It would take a lot of will power to
stop reading then, and say to yourself, "Ooooh -- the Marauder's
Map never lies, so the impostor must be named Bartemius
Crouch! I bet he's Barty's son-- guess he was a Death Eater,
after all."
It would be an educated guess, not an Ellery Queen style
deduction, because you can't *prove* that the impostor is young
Barty until the spell wears off and Snape identifies him.
My educated guess is that there are two Wormtails. But we
probably don't have all the clues yet.
Pippin
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