Characters and the revelation model (Was: Re: Depth?)
juli17 at aol.com
juli17 at aol.com
Sun Sep 11 06:49:59 UTC 2005
No: HPFGUIDX 139954
> Betsy Hp:
> So James really *is* retiring and shy? <g> Yes, the best way to
> build up to a big reveal is to leave blank spaces and allow the
> reader to assume. But the author is unwise to lie. And you seem
> to be suggesting that JKR lied. That we should ignore everything
> that occured during the pensieve flashback. That seems...wasteful
> to me. If it's all untrue, why write it to begin with?
Nora wrote:
Not lying. Complicating. We keep open the idea that the Pensieve
scene is a snapshot of one aspect of character, one point in time--
but we are very wary of the assumption that we're going to
extrapolate that to cover all situations. You seem very comfortable
using one scene as the baseline for all formulations of character,
and linking up the similarities smoothly. In situations with such
little information, what you get depends on how you read--you want
similarities, you get them; you want differences, you get them too.
Julie says:
Actually, it's not only one scene. We also have Sirius and Lupin's
admission of culpability in that scene, McGonagall's recall of James
and Sirius as first class troublemakers, and Snape's assignment of
files containing cards outlining various misdeeds of Sirius and James
throughout their school years (which appear to be quite numerous,
if generally of the petty variety). There are probably some additional
moments I missed. Clearly James and Sirius were the Fred and
George of their time.
That evidence taken as a whole gives us a fair amount of reliable
and consistent information, and provides a strong baseline on
which to formulate the youthful characters of James and Sirius.
No leaps of logic or embellishments of canon required :-)
The actual information we are missing isn't whether James was
arrogant and a bit of a bully as a teenager, but what happened
to temper those traits--not erase them, but temper them--into more
positive manifestations (like self-confidence in place of arrogance).
I think Becky is correct that the Prank probably served as a wake-up
call, and the normal progression of maturity (along with Lily's influence)
solidified James' adult character.
Julie
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